A vedic relationship poem. Any feedback would be appreciated.

April 29, 2022 at 00:57 (UT/GMT)
(Gemini) Cjwright23
A vedic relationship poem. Any feedback would be appreciated.
Choke life from my
fallen stars, retrieve each
breath, before the daring whisper of your name
crawls from my narrow hourglass.
Hands of time melt, in
my struggle to come undone Aching for finality, my pain
is alive a separatist
compelled to bury you
beneath bed linens
Hacking bits of you that scratch my throat.
The you, that deafens me
blinds me, debilitates every
new life I attempt to
achieve without you
With half hearted wit
I relish to entertain a half hearted moon,
with her one lazy eye
she gathers shredded
clouds to absorb my tears
and cushion my fall

I spoon with the most
chilling part of her, as she
leans to one side her horizon long gone, nothing but
a warm trickle of lunar
blood that paints your
name with mine before
each new life I enter
I am not likened to the one
who bears my name
I want to know nothing
of a new life, from old dreams
the me without you
Old lies told, I stumble
into new dreams, of the
old me

I beg for nothing
but to live, without ever knowing who you are
who you once were
or will ever be
Shed my skin
I don´t want to be me
any longer your plasma
injected into warm veins
the cruelty you possess
dragging me eternally
into your fear driven world where the crust of your
karmic debt fuels the
flame that burns my core

Written by CM April 27, 2022
This is a poem my mother in law wrote for her husband who is a malignant narcissist whom she has been married to for 42 years, has 3 children with, and who she believes is karmically tied to her and they have been together in past lives. She believes the same problem keeps reoccurring with them and has experienced a tremendous amount of pain due to their struggles. I wanted to post it to get feedback from the astrology world. So, please feel free to express what you think, feel, or can relate to about it. So please, don´t hold back, be honest, and let me know what you guys think. THANKS :D have a wonderful day everyone !!!

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April 29, 2022 at 10:04
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